Oh, Dearest Mother, Sweetest Virgin of Altagracia, our Patroness. You are our Advocate and to you we recommend our needs. You are our Teacher and like disciples we come to learn from the example of your holy life. You are our Mother, and like children, we come to offer you all of the love of our hearts. Receive, dearest Mother, our offerings and listen attentively to our supplications. Amen.



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Posted: Nov 13 2008 at 12:46pm | IP Logged Quote motherly loving
I'm not sure if this is the right forum category to shrae this in, so sorry if I posted incorrectly. I just thought I would share this poem from an unborn child that I wrote.

I have been writing this in my head for the last few months as I have been praying for the future of the unborn during this election season. I had hoped to post this before the election, but I could never finish it, so I can only imagine that God has a purpose for this little poem other than swaying a vote. I hope that even just one person will read this and realize that life really does begin at conception. I wish I had great literary talents but writing simple little poems is a happy past time for me. My poems can't ever be compared to Dickinson or Poe but that isn't my goal. I just want to touch a heart or open a mind. I'm always nervous to share things like this so please be kind in you judgement and take it for what it is.

A Child's Farewell

Your soft and steady heartbeat is all I know,
the sonata to which in this womb I grow.

Before you knew of me, I looked upon you from heaven,
but I'm already forgetting so I can befriend you again.

I am growing and awaiting the day we will meet
when you'll hold me and realize your life is complete.

Now your pulse is wild, your heart is beating so fast,
Sweet mother don't be frightened, this worry will not last.

I promise with time you will be happy I am here
that my life will give you life, never a regretful tear.

But something is happening, I see my angel of light,
She tells me not to fear the dawn of the night.

It's suddenly so cold and the scalpel is coming near
We were two now we're one, Goodbye mother dear

I never saw your face but your beauty I know
and His forgiveness will rediscover it underneath your sorrow

If you think of me someday know I will love you forever,
for regardless of your Choice, you are evermore my mother.

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