Oh, Dearest Mother, Sweetest Virgin of Altagracia, our Patroness. You are our Advocate and to you we recommend our needs. You are our Teacher and like disciples we come to learn from the example of your holy life. You are our Mother, and like children, we come to offer you all of the love of our hearts. Receive, dearest Mother, our offerings and listen attentively to our supplications. Amen.



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LMuse
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Posted: Nov 05 2005 at 3:32pm | IP Logged Quote LMuse
My mother picked up my two middle girls ages almost 5 and 3.5. They went to her house to build a fairy house (just like those expensive ones in Magic Cabin) and do things fairy related.

One of the things my 4yr 11mo wanted to do was write a poem so my mom took dictation. I promised her I would "publish" it on the www so here goes... (I mistakenly tried to put it on the creative writing forum before posting here, not realizing that forum is for teens only... I couldn't figure out where else to put it so here it is <smile>)

We love to dance every day
You know that every day.
So, what I love you every day.
So, Mommy, I do you this poem.

So, what are you going to do today?
I love Mamma. So, when do you know
Can you know what we are doing?

Thanks for letting me share!
Lara
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Posted: Nov 05 2005 at 7:17pm | IP Logged Quote Karen E.
Lara,

That is so sweet. Thanks for sharing it.

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Posted: Nov 06 2005 at 11:10pm | IP Logged Quote cctabb
Oh, so cute.

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