Oh, Dearest Mother, Sweetest Virgin of Altagracia, our Patroness. You are our Advocate and to you we recommend our needs. You are our Teacher and like disciples we come to learn from the example of your holy life. You are our Mother, and like children, we come to offer you all of the love of our hearts. Receive, dearest Mother, our offerings and listen attentively to our supplications. Amen.



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Tina P.
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Posted: Oct 19 2006 at 11:06am | IP Logged Quote Tina P.
God created the whole world. God made seas, God made trees. At the nighttime, there was a moon shining and God made twinkle stars in the whole dark sky. He thought of more stuff and he made elephants, monkeys, birds, all different kinds of colored fishies. He thought of making a person named Adam and he did. Adam was lonely and God made one more person. Her name was Eve. Adam and eve lived in the garden of evenin’.

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How precious! I love the parts "He thought of more stuff..." and the "twinkle stars"!Too cute!

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Beautiful - like poetry. I love the "garden of evenin'"
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Very sweet.

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